8 thoughts on “Your Song

  1. I really enjoy this poem, but the word “cascading” seems to be throwing me off. Without it, we keep the rhythm of the first line without losing the image of rolling tears.

    Then again, maybe that’s the point: to disrupt the rhythm and divert attention.

    Regardless, I really dig this. Keep on keepin’ on, friend.

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